Thursday, September 19, 2013

Suzanne Bachman Blog post 2

This article, "Frisking Tactic Yields to a Focus on Town Gangs," is a good article with a strong lead.  This has a very interesting lead that makes you want to continue reading.  This lead has more than 30 words, which reading the packet, says it should be under, it still conveys everything a lead should have. Is states the what, where, when, and who.  The lead's first verb is killing which explains this boy lost his life, which is what the whole article is about.

http://www.nytimes.com/2013/09/19/nyregion/frisking-tactic-yields-to-a-focus-on-youth-gangs.html?ref=nyregion


Friday, September 13, 2013